Nice verse.
Poignant for sure. I think it could be a part of somehting greater and very thought provoking. Here be this. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/368583
Nice verse.
Poignant for sure. I think it could be a part of somehting greater and very thought provoking. Here be this. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/368583
Your best track to date.
Unfreaking believable! This track needs to be put on the radio. It needs to be a hit. I needs some kind of exposier to the masses. The bar has been raised to a very high place folks. It just got harder to impress.
Thanks brotha-man!!!
I feel it
Its got that Kenye Common Vibe to it. With a sprinkle of Dilla. Really nothing bad to point out. Id say its on par with your better stuff. Good one.
Thanks man!
Yep.
Nice!
Ill show you!
Ill show you!!! 5/5! Take that!
ah! ooh! no! lol thanks man!
I like it better
While the other one was great. I think this one has a nice bounce to it and feels mor elike a unified work. Great job.
I can't even tell you how glad I am that you pointed out the drums. There was just too much going on with the break and it didn't really meld with the horns.
Thanks again!
Original
Its an abstract type of beat for sure. Needless to say the horns are cool. That beat is dope right there. I like the breaks in there. and where the horns chnage up they almost reach greatness. I find the samples too somber to go with the beat if there was another small element to compliment the melody i think the drums would fit better.
I totally agree, the break is a little too energetic for the horns. When i revisit this one, I'll probably switch up the drums with something a little more lounge/ chill. When I started this, I was actually using another part of the song, but when I heard the sample, I basically shit myself, lol.
Thanks for the review!
Legit Lyricist
You got mad flow bro, you did the beat justice I love it. I like the additions you added in the start of the song. Very appropriate. The lyrics themselves are thought provoking and clever. The videogame references made me grin and i really like how you related the references to the theme of the song. How can i not give a 10. Great work.
Thanks alot bro :D. I'm down to put lyrics on more of your beats, if you want. and i wasnt sure if anyone would understand what the verses and theme of the song were, so i'll tell you haha. For the first verse i was talking about being young, doing drugs, being invincable. then second was like the ups and downs in life, trying to get back to that happy place in your life the right way.
I like this tempo.
Real battle hip hop worthy. The sample work is on point. You are a proving to be a real talent dude. We should collab sometime.
Thanks dude. I'd love to collab but I wouldn't know how to go about it, and I'm not really great at making music, I just get lucky sometimes lol
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