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[[H] [Shaggy] The Lazy Legend]

Good stuff.

Your flow with the beat is spot on. This is more your speed. I like the chorus you came up with. Your delivery is much more consistant and the spit is very understandable. Pretty damn good if you ask me.

HeIsAlive responds:

Thanks a bunch man.
Glad that everyone is liking it :D

Except for those occasional 0-Bombs.

[Fasho! [7000]]

Oh what!?

I just discovered you O_O. You're my hero dude.

[[H] [Benjada] The Stormy Eyes]

Rough around the edges but overall...

not bad. The content of your rhymes are pretty good. Its your delivery that needs some work especially toward the end. you stumble a bit at the end and the lines become jumbled and off beat a bit. The slower bits are good and the way your voice drones with the beat is nice. Keep revising your flow and im sure itll come around to greatness.

HeIsAlive responds:

Thanks man.

I agree, I am having trouble getting a consistent form of flow, but this was just to see how well I can do now. I see much room for improvement and I intend to achieve it.

Even though im not a rapper XP

[NGHH'11 - Nimbus vs Cynic]

All but even.

Nimbus - comes out swinging. His flow is tight thought at times he bites off more than he can chew when it comes to words per second. His slower bits are much more compelling and effective in this verse. As for content, theres some semi - clever stuff here. Disses are on point. Voice is decent. You are defenatly adept for faster spits. Just need to execute better. Verse 1 i feel goes to Nimbus and Verse 2 Numbus is strong.

Cynic - stumbles a bit on a couple lines there but flow overall i feel is a bit tighter than Nimbus, again at the slower bits. As for content the disses are not bad but i think there was just more quantity of jabs in nimbus' verse. I've said it before your voice is made for spitting. This isn't something Nimbus can overcome, so i guess i cant really weigh it when it comes to the battle. In Verse 2 Cynic does much better than in the first. The Disses are much more clever and have better execution. Verse 2 goes to Cynic overall better than verse 1.

I thought Cynic would trample most people in the battle but Nimbus goes hard in this round. Still because of Verse 2 Cynic pulls out by a hair.

Good battle. -Peace

[Kami | John Marston]

Ahh the bass....

I wish i could do it.

Kamikazi1 responds:

K ill leave you both a room :)

[Kami | Its you]

Wholly jazzmatazz!

love the precussion here and those guitar strings are jazzing me the funk out. Chill music at its finest. Your other track outshines it.

Kamikazi1 responds:

lol i kinda thought that it would outshine it i might do more with this tho glad ya dig it :)

[Kami | Lights dim]

well im trippin.

Grand master sample work. Its an amazing peice thats soothing and really gets your mind going after only a few seconds. The way the track fills in is great and i love it. One of your best i think.

Kamikazi1 responds:

Thanks my man its gotta be one of my favorites so far, its good for lounging and being lazy lol

[-GM- Chasm]

Great for a spit

Nice drum work. Great for a raw spit. Review this people.

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Great! I'm glad it was good enough for your review my good sir.

[d[-_-]b -A- Freeverse 3 WIP]

Flow.

You got it and it fits the beat very nicely. Theres some good lyrics here and it sounds natural. Your delivery is solid. As for your verse 2 troubles.. uhhhh i dont write so i cant help lol. What i can say is sometimes you just gotta be in your element and try to snag those ideas before they just kinda dissappear to the back of your mind. I carry a recorder around with me everywhere now. So when i beat pops into my head i quickly "beatbox" so it doesn't escape me. Good work and good luck.