I'm very confused.
What is this... I don't even... The beat isnt bad.. but the beat is also by War-spawn. I guess since im not sure what goed on in NG i can't really probabaly comment. Mothefucker does rhyme with motherfucker.
I'm very confused.
What is this... I don't even... The beat isnt bad.. but the beat is also by War-spawn. I guess since im not sure what goed on in NG i can't really probabaly comment. Mothefucker does rhyme with motherfucker.
This song is a diss to a guy named Kamikazi Master. And MotherFucker does rhyme with MotherFucker, doesn't it? lol.
uhhh yes!
This is the kind of shit i like! Real hip hop. Ambiguous and full of soul funk jazz whatever you feel at the moment. Great track! Faved and saved.
Ready for adding acapellas
Chillll grungyness
I like the scratchyness going on here lol. Slow and catchy and the samples sprinkled in really give it personality. Would be great for a soulful deep spit from red. Youre getting up there my man youve come a long way.
Thanks Man, Good To Hear From You.
The Scratchyness Is Actually A Cymbal I Tweaked Into A Sort Of Scratchy Shaker Sound.
I Just Try To Make Good Music.
Bangin beat
you got some nice production. your songs are easy to listen to and move on to the next. I like that kind of style. This has a grimey feel to it but also somehting slightly sophisticated going on. Would be a good beat for a seamless freestyle spit. Good work.
Why, thank you very much!
flow is tighter
Lyrics are on point. Beat is dope. I think its a winner. When you drone on its when it really works. Youre in the zone my man. Keep up the good work.
Thanks man, you should look at some of the older songs i re-did recently. leave something on those, im just trying to get a nice sound out.
Thanks for the comment man :D
yes
im driftin to this my dude. Very cool. Very slow. But has an uplifting quality. You do very well with drums. imma have to steal some of that.
thanks man yea i tuned those guitars way down to fit the tempo and it came out nice. the drums remind me of a kankick beat (if u know him), but yes i have been spending extra time on my drums, thanks for noticing. i always look forward to what you and other dope producers on NG think.
Welp
Dopeness achieved. The spit is so damn chil and relaxed but its got a sway to it that gets you movin while you drift along. Great feel. Love the first and second part. I gotta get that ambient sound into my tracks. Sounds professional bro.
hey dureagon thanks for checking me out again. i like this track's feel alot too, alot of the accents and change ups in the beat are added without quantize so it feels more natural and messy. props on ur new stuff as well man
Good stuff.
Your flow with the beat is spot on. This is more your speed. I like the chorus you came up with. Your delivery is much more consistant and the spit is very understandable. Pretty damn good if you ask me.
Thanks a bunch man.
Glad that everyone is liking it :D
Except for those occasional 0-Bombs.
Rough around the edges but overall...
not bad. The content of your rhymes are pretty good. Its your delivery that needs some work especially toward the end. you stumble a bit at the end and the lines become jumbled and off beat a bit. The slower bits are good and the way your voice drones with the beat is nice. Keep revising your flow and im sure itll come around to greatness.
Thanks man.
I agree, I am having trouble getting a consistent form of flow, but this was just to see how well I can do now. I see much room for improvement and I intend to achieve it.
Even though im not a rapper XP
Ahh the bass....
I wish i could do it.
K ill leave you both a room :)
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