I'm going to be honest.
The lyrics are old school and theres nothign wrong with that. It's got a decent flow. The record quality is good. There is some unevenness witht he levels in there and some of the effects are a bit off but its solid. What got me is the hook. Its great. Now whenever i hear this your hook pops into my head. Its my preferred way of envisioning the song and that means a lot. Good work.